As I look out my window and pray for a cessation of this rain, I am packing for a weekend of camping in upstate New York. I am eagerly awaiting the smells of the woods, the wet grass, the burning fire, the spring flowers. As a dedicated New Yorker, I am especially looking forward to the peace and quiet that only undisturbed nature can provide. Most of all, I am excited about the natural mindfulness that such a trip brings.
Already this morning, I feel a greater concentration and deliberateness in my behavior. I woke. I moved the car. I changed the baby’s diaper. I brewed the coffee. I packed a few things. I sat down to write this post. There is greater simplicity and clarity on days when we change our patterns. In the woods, I will climb the hill, pitch the tent, spark the fire. When in nature–also when relieved from our everyday, working routine–the world sharpens, and I find I can more seamlessly hold my mind in the present moment.
In terms of poetry, going to the woods makes me think of Gary Snyder, our a great American Buddhist poet, the inspiration for the Japhy Ryder character in Kerouac’s The Dharma Bums, the veritable Zen environmentalist, the Thoreau of the Beat Generation. Snyder’s famous poem “Riprap” captures the essence of his mindfulness…
"Riprap"
Lay down these words Before your mind like rocks. placed solid, by hands In choice of place, set Before the body of the mind in space and time: Solidity of bark, leaf or wall riprap of things: Cobble of milky way, straying planets, These poems, people, lost ponies with Dragging saddles -- and rocky sure-foot trails. The worlds like an endless four-dimensional Game of Go. ants and pebbles In the thin loam, each rock a word a creek-washed stone Granite: ingrained with torment of fire and weight Crystal and sediment linked hot all change, in thoughts, As well as things.
Much has been and could be said about these lines. Speaking technically, Richard Gray wrote, "These lines are as remarkable for what they omit as for what they exclude: there are no elaborate figures; no closewoven argument, no irony or introspection." Synder writes with a universal,plainspoken language. Moreover, the poems sings of a non-dual view, of the continual flux between matter and energy: the stones and the laying of the stones produce the poetry, then the words themselves in the poem are stones, heavy and real. Synder himself wrote that the title--which refers to a cobble of stone laid to make a trail for horses in the mountain--"celebrates the work of hands, the placing of rock, and my first glimpse of theimage of the whole universe as interconnected, interpenetrating, mutually reflecting, and mutually embracing."
For me, the thought that this poem combined with my heading off to the woods for a weekend of camping brings to mind is what I might call country-mindfulness. I aspire to the kind of mindfulness Snyder achieved, to his brand of openness and efficiency of mind; in the poem "Goofing Again", he spills a gallon of pain over "fresh white bulkhead" and says, "now I have to paint the wall again / & salvage only from it a poem." Yes, I aspire to Snyder's transcendental country-mindfulness, but at the same time, I am committed to the city. It's an old thought, but a persistent bugger: Is it harder in the city, amidst such energy and noise and distraction, to muster such pure absorption and attention? I don't know. In the end, it may not be harder in the city, but I know it's alittle easier in the country.



posted June 27, 2009 at 9:12 am
What a wonderful poem and your comments are astute! That and “Axe Handles” exemplify the best of Gary Snyder for me. Thanks for posting this. (Found by way of Poetry Hut.)